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Good Deeds

good deeds, would bring, the hoods needs down, should we frown; upon people of charitable consciousness? Inheritable prominence, doesn't complement, who we are, like multiple atoms flowing near moving stars, we come together, whatever the weather, and when ever endeavors, of non-pleasure surface. we question the purpose, as the essence is worked in, to the curtains, of visual perception, Theres minimal objections, to helping others, I'm inhaling the wonders, of prana, Like uncovering sauna's, theres allota, steam, so all them deeds, witch were good become anomalies, in time, so your psychologically inclined, to be a better person...

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Date: 5/28/2011 9:33:00 AM
Reza congratulations on your awesome win in DA's contest ;)
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Date: 5/28/2011 7:36:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 5/27/2011 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Dane, Reza
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Date: 5/27/2011 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations, Reza, on your shared 2nd place win in my contest. I always judge them blind, without knowing who the authors are. So, when I come here to see who won, I get a wonderful surprise. It is so nice to see you here among the winners. Thank you for supporting my contest...and for your patience in waiting for the results. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 5/27/2011 9:38:00 AM
Congratulatons on your win in the "Good Deeds" contest Reza. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/27/2011 9:01:00 AM
congrats Reza on your fantastic win in the good deeds contest luv.. excellent entry ..enjoy..
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Date: 5/27/2011 6:14:00 AM
this was great. congrats on your win. cory
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Date: 1/9/2011 3:30:00 PM
''we come together, whatever the weather''.. A very nice poem. Thank you for sharing. Hope this is in a winning position. Good luck. Valeria Iliadou
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