Good Deeds
good deeds,
would bring,
the hoods needs down,
should we frown; upon
people of charitable consciousness?
Inheritable prominence,
doesn't complement,
who we are,
like multiple atoms flowing near moving stars,
we come together,
whatever the weather, and when ever endeavors,
of non-pleasure surface.
we question the purpose,
as the essence is worked in,
to the curtains, of visual perception,
Theres minimal objections,
to helping others,
I'm inhaling the wonders,
of prana,
Like uncovering sauna's,
theres allota, steam,
so all them deeds,
witch were good become anomalies,
in time,
so your psychologically inclined,
to be a better person...
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