Good Day

This day has been one of the best,
the day before the Sabbath, today we did rest.
Yesterday my baby and I took a night out.
Playing jukebox music, pool and trying to not shout.

We spent our day and night out, with each other,
knowing our love is God given for us to be together.
As we grow in faith we humbly acknowledge,
to serve our Saviour, is something that is solid.

Not many out their have this love for the ages,
and our Saviour is teaching us to turn his pages.
We are bonded in life, as we study his revival,
the holy book that is called the Bible.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 16, 2011 at 4:40 PM
this was really good i liked it cory
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April 15, 2011 at 11:55 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this afternoon Robert. Have a great weekend and I hope you find lots of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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April 14, 2011 at 7:47 PM
When you have this type of faith, every day and night is special, Robert. I admire your spiritual style of writing very much. Love, Carolyn
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