Good Bye To Love

Soft summer breeze blows Lovers romance at an end good bye embrace as eyes lock

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2010 9:30:00 AM

Another great win for you, Audrey. Very nice! andrea

John Freeman

Date: 5/17/2010 6:21:00 PM

An awesome #3 win Audrey, Congratulations another win for you to enjoy. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2010 4:30:00 PM

Wonderful words my BBF and congrats on your win.. lovely words to depict the photo and relate to my current situation.. OVER.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2010 3:25:00 PM

Audrey, congratulations on placing third in the contest with this beautiful poem! Best wishes, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/17/2010 12:00:00 PM

such a bittersweet write, Audrey! hmm could there be a part 2 to this, maybe a hello to love? sorry I keep on popping up like a mushroom here at the soup--hmm, mushroom soup, anyone? lol! thanks for always dropping by my poems even if I'm not always here :)

John Rhinem

Date: 5/15/2010 10:42:00 PM

Smile, sounds like the end of a summers resort moment? And I really liked the way that you left the abstract in place---from your splendid title to their eyes embracing at the end---excellent dear lady; and reveals quite a bit of talent actually! Smile, I bet that you are going to become a very bright light within this place! ~ "Much Warmth To You & Yours Always," John!" ~ Bye:)

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/15/2010 5:32:00 PM

this is really sweet. but also sad, a goodbye is sometimes never complete.hopefully these lovers will have one another in dreams. .and im glad my recent poem was a reminder to you, if so then i hope things in your life and others connected are well. -Always&Forever Lynette

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/15/2010 3:57:00 PM

enjoyed as well,..p.d.