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Good Bye To Love

Soft summer breeze blows
Lovers romance at an end
good bye embrace as eyes lock

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Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2010 at 9:30 AM

Another great win for you, Audrey. Very nice! andrea

John Freeman

May 17, 2010 at 6:21 PM

An awesome #3 win Audrey, Congratulations another win for you to enjoy. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 17, 2010 at 4:30 PM

Wonderful words my BBF and congrats on your win.. lovely words to depict the photo and relate to my current situation.. OVER.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

May 17, 2010 at 3:25 PM

Audrey, congratulations on placing third in the contest with this beautiful poem! Best wishes, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 17, 2010 at 12:00 PM

such a bittersweet write, Audrey! hmm could there be a part 2 to this, maybe a hello to love? sorry I keep on popping up like a mushroom here at the soup--hmm, mushroom soup, anyone? lol! thanks for always dropping by my poems even if I'm not always here :)

John Rhinem

May 15, 2010 at 10:42 PM

Smile, sounds like the end of a summers resort moment? And I really liked the way that you left the abstract in place---from your splendid title to their eyes embracing at the end---excellent dear lady; and reveals quite a bit of talent actually! Smile, I bet that you are going to become a very bright light within this place! ~ "Much Warmth To You & Yours Always," John!" ~ Bye:)

Lynette Chachere

May 15, 2010 at 5:32 PM

this is really sweet. but also sad, a goodbye is sometimes never complete.hopefully these lovers will have one another in dreams. .and im glad my recent poem was a reminder to you, if so then i hope things in your life and others connected are well. -Always&Forever Lynette