Good Bye Mother

I haven't crumbled, I haven't cried, I shed a few silent tears, but now my eyes have dried, I lost my maker, I lost my biggest fan, I lost the one who made this little boy into a man, I read a lot of philosophy, made plenty of my own too, but today I realised what letting go means, when it's forced unto you, my apologies to all I hurt, my apologies to her too, I could have been a bit better in behaving with you, I thank you dear people for being there in my time of need, I say good bye to my tree of life who has gone back into her seed. I hope you can hear me wherever you are hid, I love you, will always do and most truly always did..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 20, 2016 at 11:59 PM
desai, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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May 5, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Thanks very much, means a lot
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December 22, 2015 at 7:23 PM
ASEEM :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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May 5, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Take care, have a great year
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