Good Bye Forever

I stare as you walk
away from me, enshrouded
in mist never again to be
seen...I'm  no more your beloved...

It's hard to know I'll
never see your smile again,
but its me who pushed you
out, me who caused you pain.

I loved you once,
and I'll love you forever
even if destiny demands
that we shan't be together.

I guess this is goodbye,
goodbye forever.
I might move on,
but forget you? never!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Hi Angie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
Thomas Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 11:40 AM
thank you linda... :)
A  Avatar
February 22, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Anige, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, enjoy the coming week **SKAT**
Sietesantos Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 5:20 PM
What an excellent write, Angie! Sad but hopeful that love may return, but if it doesn't, you'll be ok - very powerful and inspirational. Bravo! Pandita
Thomas Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 8:10 PM
Thank you Pandita :) I'm glad that you liked my work :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 4:06 PM
A sad farewell when it has to be forever!! NIcely rhymed, Angie.
Thomas Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 8:09 PM
Yes Andrea, quite heartbreaking, but that's just what life is like I guess...
Callus Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 8:32 AM
Lovely write, Angie! Touching and sad....how cruel can destiny be! But love is still burning strong....perhaps...who knows what the future holds! // paul
Thomas Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 3:59 AM
Thank you Paul... Yes, who knows what Destiny holds... All I can say is that I hope its something good....
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 8:19 AM
This is so emotional and sad Angie - beautifully penned:-) Hugs Jan xx
Thomas Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 3:59 AM
Thank you for the lovely feedback Jan... :)
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