Good Bye Forever

I stare as you walk
away from me, enshrouded
in mist never again to be
seen...I'm  no more your beloved...

It's hard to know I'll
never see your smile again,
but its me who pushed you
out, me who caused you pain.

I loved you once,
and I'll love you forever
even if destiny demands
that we shan't be together.

I guess this is goodbye,
goodbye forever.
I might move on,
but forget you? never!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/22/2015 6:00:00 PM
Hi Angie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/17/2015 11:40:00 AM
thank you linda... :)
Date: 2/22/2015 2:49:00 PM
Anige, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, enjoy the coming week **SKAT**
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Date: 2/12/2015 5:20:00 PM
What an excellent write, Angie! Sad but hopeful that love may return, but if it doesn't, you'll be ok - very powerful and inspirational. Bravo! Pandita
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Date: 2/12/2015 8:10:00 PM
Thank you Pandita :) I'm glad that you liked my work :)
Date: 10/22/2014 4:06:00 PM
A sad farewell when it has to be forever!! NIcely rhymed, Angie.
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Date: 2/12/2015 8:09:00 PM
Yes Andrea, quite heartbreaking, but that's just what life is like I guess...
Date: 10/22/2014 8:32:00 AM
Lovely write, Angie! Touching and sad....how cruel can destiny be! But love is still burning strong....perhaps...who knows what the future holds! // paul
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Date: 2/12/2015 3:59:00 AM
Thank you Paul... Yes, who knows what Destiny holds... All I can say is that I hope its something good....
Date: 10/11/2014 8:19:00 AM
This is so emotional and sad Angie - beautifully penned:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/12/2015 3:59:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely feedback Jan... :)
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