Good Buy

days has past and night has come
many things has happen but for now they're all gone
we hade alot of lifes pain and most of lifes fun
we lived the way we could but for now they're all gone
we sleep tonight and say goodnight
dreaming of the fantacy of the past
tomorow has come to be now the presence of time
the day for us to move on with our life
taking a deep breath not looking behind 
pulled my hand up and wave good buy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 7, 2009 at 3:33 AM
Hello Milka and welcome to PoetrySoup. Very interesting read here. You might want to run the free spell checker here before you post your work. I use it everytime before I post my poems. Please continue to write and share with us. Love, Carol
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