Goobye

Close the door and never
think twice.
Love is a gamble.
Inwhich we all roll the dice.

Many dreams are broken under
a moonlit sky.
Yet no word hold the pain 
like goodbye.

I rememeber it so very well.
Nights wrapped in passion.
As silent promises as lovers 
we tell.

Tressure thoose thoughts 
And buty them deep..
take my heart.
For its forever yours to keep.

Still night memeories show so very clear.
They torture thoose thoughts.
that tell me your no longer here.

the brige now burnt  stands as a memorial
underneath a starlit sky.
I find solace in the pain.
 as all i hear is goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Madden Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 8:15 AM
WOW i really like this poem, great emotion!!!
Chircop Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 10:00 AM
goodbye---a hard woed when you know its forever,when you know you wont see the one you love anymore,its hard and we think of the past as it is still present as if it was still there,but we have to let go,or else we die,how greatly you express feelings and emotions we all can relate too--this goes to my favs---charma
Loveless Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 9:36 AM
Wow, absolutly stunning John. This is a winner for sure. Amazing job i love this ^^ <3 Jese
Bird Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 8:40 PM
It hurts too much to say goodbye, such a horrid word at times when we lose our loves, I can identify with this well written piece and I know the pain.
Loveless Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 6:41 PM
This is a beautiful write john.
Shango Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 6:25 PM
A very true definition of goodbye ... my friend, I wish there were reconciliation to cancel them ... life goes on.
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