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Gone with everlasting love

As midnight approaches, your day will begin So many years passed, but your day it is again I have written about you often, it will never get old Like all the changing seasons, I watch unfold A broken heart from loss, still holds the cracks seen Like imprints in fallen snow, once seen as pristine I write with depth, not with pain for readers to see I write with forever thoughts, in your memory It is you willing to reach in the sky, giving me stars to shine In the darkest of times, you represented a shrine Because the sacrifice of your life, elevates far above Anything someone could do, gone with everlasting love Heidi Sands 12/22/23

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Joseph May

Date: 12/24/2023 3:52:00 AM

A heartfelt tribute Heidi, Very nicely penned

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/24/2023 6:39:00 AM

Thank you very much Joseph. I hope you have a nice day :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 12/23/2023 3:10:00 PM

Lovely sad emotional write dear lovely Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/23/2023 3:24:00 PM

Thank you Abdullah :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/23/2023 11:07:00 AM

Hello Heidi, yes a broken heart does hold a loss. I do agree. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/24/2023 3:02:00 PM

Hello Heidi, I also appreciate our friendship. You arew welcome. Merry Christmas. Hugs. /Darlene/.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/23/2023 12:57:00 PM

You are right Darlene , it does. I appreciate our friendship. Thank you! :)

Ink Empress

Date: 12/23/2023 10:24:00 AM

Some seasons can be more painful than the rest, i have those few months, or dates that i find so difficult to deal with as it reminds me of loss of someone dear or loved ones. I felt the depth of this sincere and heartfelt write, as you’ve expressed so well about eternal love. That never dies or fades amidst time of fleeting seasons, i felt this: sending you light always

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/23/2023 12:56:00 PM

Thank you so very much. Your understanding means a lot to me. Thank you for taking the time to comment. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/23/2023 6:00:00 AM

Words of faith and inspiration, my friend--revered sentiments--a message of hope and light!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/23/2023 12:54:00 PM

I love yo see your comments Vijay. I am grateful for them and our friendship. Thank you ! :)

Silent One

Date: 12/23/2023 3:50:00 AM

This is a touching poem my friend and this time of year can bring out these emotions to so many...

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/23/2023 5:51:00 AM

Thank you. Yes this time of year can and today is the day he passed away. I appreciate your comment :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/23/2023 12:02:00 AM

A beautiful tribute Heidi, they live on in your heart and mind. I find Christmas quite an emotional time when you remember those that you have lost. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/23/2023 5:50:00 AM

Thank you Tom. He is always with me , but today is the day he passed. I appreciate your comment :)