Gone To the Dogs

Whither
my rose of June ?
What ! July hips so soon,
ripe,stripped bare ..a finches menu
lunch fare.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 8:45 AM
Enjoy it while it lasts because it does fly bye! Great write as always Brian!
Brown Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 8:42 AM
The cycle of life so to speak. Outstanding Brian. Love, Carol
Higgins Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 8:04 AM
The summer goes by too quickly ..love the title and the poem works very well.
Jordan Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 7:40 AM
Good morning Brian - The truth of it all - seasons seem to come and go so swiftly - Wonderful Cinquain Brian - God Bless, MJ
Richards Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Yes...the season swiftly changes...seems like things were beautifully in full bloom...but soon fade in summer heat...our roses will come back with a second bloom, usually do, when things cool down.
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