Brandy Franklin Poet Rhyme

Gone, So Goodbye

GONE, SO GOODBYE

I miss your soft lips, gentle touch and the Brown of your eyes.
Can't seem to find myself, pretending, just keep living the lies.
It was your time, I have to let you go.
Painful to admit, the tears start to flow.
But my darling it's been a long four years.
Now I must move forward. I've overcome my fears.
As one last tear falls to the page,
I am no longer full of sadness and rage
You will be in my heart even after I die
I now accept you are
                           GONE, SO GOODBYE

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Beata Agustin April 28, 2024 at 8:28 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 10, 2016 at 12:46 AM BRANDY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA

David Gordon August 8, 2014 at 8:15 AM Lovely poem. Thanks for posting.