Gone Right Now.

Staring, just staring but there nothing there nothing to do and going nowhere the anger builds up and its trapped inside theres nowhere to run and nowhere to hide it feels like your going to explode and its all gonna come out then when it comes to the point whats it all about So the anger builds up keeps going and going then you brake down in tears just thinking and knowing my life is like this but why and how its no good like this so im gone right now.
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Date: 5/18/2009 9:15:00 AM
another poem filled with emotion and feeling.
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Date: 5/17/2009 10:02:00 PM
Pain is one of the best impulses to start any kind of artistic activity (as long as you don't stay too much in there); this poem is honest and fluid, so cold (even with the magma nature of anger); great one indeed; thanks for sharing!!! and I hope everything is fine now =D=D bye bye
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Date: 5/17/2009 9:17:00 PM
Dear Katie, Another Beautiful Rhyme Form of POETRY If YOU read and comment on two POEMS to each of YOUR one, The aching in YOUR Heart and Soul will ease up dramatically YOU write with YOUR Heart I'm going to watch YOUR Heart Grow Blessings ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/17/2009 7:15:00 PM
Life can be very hard at times, but most rewarding if only you seek the Lord. - jeremiah
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