Gone Forever

Lost my woman tonight      Gone forever       Should have       I could not stop her       Make her see      Together     We could make things right       Truly thought      This woman In my life       Would one day       Be my wife       Goodbye my love                                    2/10/2013
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Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 7:11 PM
thanks for the message. . What i meant to say is "biggest SELLERS" by number of albums sold. Beatles is one for that, with Stones second and CC is third. In the US anyway!!!! Are you in England?
Ferry Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 9:59 PM
I am now in Las Vegas...was in Costa Rica and Brazil last ten years
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October 16, 2013 at 8:10 PM
Andrea..I was there in the late 60s and 70s..Beatles only #1 with 14 year old girls.I did vocals and played a little sax with a pretty well known band back then. Stones were supreme.Hendrix best guitar. Ginger Baker #1 on drums. I could rattle off dozens of groups that put on better performance than the Beatles. Problem ,nobody could keep it together long enough ...Beatles stayed the course and put out a ton of music..A lot of it 2nd rate,Ask anybody who lived it..No way the Beatles.
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October 16, 2013 at 6:05 PM
a sad one from you, Richard. You still have never told me why you make all your poems in this style. I think it is a great way to distinguish yourself, but it just does not work with the acrostic form!! Anyway, you must mean Rolling stones was number one with YOU. In the 60s they were number two after Beatles, but the American Band Creedance Clearwater was number three, if I remember correctly from the rock history class I used to teach.
Ferry Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 8:30 PM
Not trying to be distinctive..Promise No more Acrostics. It seems all my life I have done things apart from the norm. Just the way it is...
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February 10, 2013 at 11:57 PM
Richard, deep..and sad poem...Linda
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