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Gone Forever

Lost my woman tonight Gone forever Should have I could not stop her Make her see Together We could make things right Truly thought This woman In my life Would one day Be my wife Goodbye my love 2/10/2013

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2013 7:11:00 PM

thanks for the message. . What i meant to say is "biggest SELLERS" by number of albums sold. Beatles is one for that, with Stones second and CC is third. In the US anyway!!!! Are you in England?

Richard Ferry
Date: 10/17/2013 9:59:00 PM

I am now in Las Vegas...was in Costa Rica and Brazil last ten years

Richard Ferry

Date: 10/16/2013 8:10:00 PM

Andrea..I was there in the late 60s and 70s..Beatles only #1 with 14 year old girls.I did vocals and played a little sax with a pretty well known band back then. Stones were supreme.Hendrix best guitar. Ginger Baker #1 on drums. I could rattle off dozens of groups that put on better performance than the Beatles. Problem ,nobody could keep it together long enough ...Beatles stayed the course and put out a ton of music..A lot of it 2nd rate,Ask anybody who lived it..No way the Beatles.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2013 6:05:00 PM

a sad one from you, Richard. You still have never told me why you make all your poems in this style. I think it is a great way to distinguish yourself, but it just does not work with the acrostic form!! Anyway, you must mean Rolling stones was number one with YOU. In the 60s they were number two after Beatles, but the American Band Creedance Clearwater was number three, if I remember correctly from the rock history class I used to teach.

Richard Ferry
Date: 10/16/2013 8:30:00 PM

Not trying to be distinctive..Promise No more Acrostics. It seems all my life I have done things apart from the norm. Just the way it is...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/10/2013 11:57:00 PM

Richard, deep..and sad poem...Linda