Gone But It Waits In The Background

Than-Bauk, another style using the step words starting with the same letter.

My youth is gone
Satan gaffed me
A genius trick

introspectionthan-bauk

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Ink Empress

September 8, 2024 at 9:04 AM

Dear sara, thats an emotion i think i need to learn in the future. Youv written very well in this form! Made me smile as you said satan gaffed a trick! Clever! Sending you light always! Hope you are doing well!

Sara Kendrick

September 8, 2024 at 1:09 PM

IE, thank you for dropping by with nice comments about my work. Yes, Satan uses trickery to make us think everything is okay and that you always have tomorrow but oh, how wrong is that idea. We are okay. Our daughter, Doris, is recuperating from total knee joint replacement. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

September 6, 2024 at 3:59 PM

As we all get older we see our youth fade away, on the bright side we gain experience and wisdom. Enjoy your weekend Sara. Tom

Sara Kendrick

September 6, 2024 at 4:42 PM

Yes, most of the time we gain experience which brings knowledge and a relationship with Jesus Christ brings wisdom, however sometimes the dreaded Alzheimer's Disease shows up robbing a person of everything. Thanks for the visit and kind review. Sara K

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