Gone Away

Should that war have been fought?
I’m not the one to say
I only know:  The-Names-On-The-Wall
Are those who’ve gone away.

absencebrotherdeath of arhyme

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Robert Nehls

July 24, 2014 at 3:43 AM

That is the greatest tragedy of war, Jack. There are so many lives that are affected by wars that never seem to change things. Short but very much to the point. A pleasure to read, my friend..... Robert.

Arlene Smith

June 3, 2014 at 2:08 AM

Wow! Jack... Love love love this one... Regardless right or wrong.. The names are family and friends we miss.....

Jack Clark

June 3, 2014 at 5:04 AM

The origins of this poem came from my visit to the Vietnam War Memorial ... 58, 261 names on The Wall. I was overcome by the enormity of that number ... still am. Vietnam was the war I was involved with ... Jack C