Gone a Soldier

January, beckons the army
February, joining the infantry
March, with a bride in church
April, young wife looking frail
May, new life well on the way
June, whistling a fatherly tune
July, days passing rapidly by
August, feeling down and lost
September, a marching order
October, consumed by his fear
November, home now a cadaver
December, darkest time of year.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/24/2008 6:22:00 AM
Well thought out and written, Wilfredo. Joys and adversities of a year in this soldier's life. Touching, for the life of a soldier is not as a pawn on a chessboard. Gratitude goes out to all these souls, for they have chosen a selfless duty. Love how this piece is written...like a diary. The last two lines impact the others. Heartwrenchiing for the ones who will be without this soul. War and politics, in both we wish for the best. Both are a tough row to hoe. God bless you and yours..Mikki
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Date: 7/17/2008 1:49:00 PM
A great write Fred... Thank you for sharing..I hope all is well young once :) TYOne, Farah
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Date: 7/14/2008 10:21:00 PM
We all hear of this kind of tale. Done in a unique way using all of the months on the calendar. Excellent. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/14/2008 7:09:00 AM
Gosh Fred, this was powerful. Extremely upsetting, but point well made. Clever and creative use of the months of the year in your poem. Depressing in its truth. Well done. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/14/2008 3:30:00 AM
I liked the way you laid out the poems by the months - I have a son in Iraq - I sure hope he comes home unharmed - blessings to you always
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