Gone

A heart once warm now lies heavy, cold as stone - weight I almost treasure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 7:43 AM
Interesting way of penning the thought expressed in your comment to Richard. The people who do the hurting of others usually don't have a clue what is going on in another's heart/mind. Thanks for dropping by. Your comment on my work "Bougainvillea" was uplifting. Sara
Docherty Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 5:47 AM
Hi Sara, thanks for your thoughts.... Of course it can be looked at in a different light of it being a person passed and the pain of grief being almost treasured in order to hold onto more of that person... A few ways to consider this one liner I think.... Appreciated. Happy New Year!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 8:24 AM
My pleasure Anna-Marie.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Somehow the weight makes it feel not so empty. A great one liner!
Docherty Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 4:20 AM
Thanks Richard, that's exactly right. I believe as time heals one person to some degree there can be satisfaction from knowing the other is finally realising what has passed and been lost. I think this is necessary for healing to start on both sides. Good to see you...
Smith Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Very deep message relayed in just one line...tremendous and congrats
Docherty Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Thank you Tim, I appreciate your coming by and commenting.
Scars Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Oh Anna- I know that pain all too well...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Docherty Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thanks luloo... m so sorry to hear that, hope your pain has eased as mine as over time. There is life beyond if you find the right person to share with. Good to see you here.
Nusker Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 1:01 PM
It's an excellent sad one liner. Congrats on your win, Anna.
Docherty Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 5:08 AM
Thank you very much, good to see you!
Smith Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations Anna-Marie, very well done...
Docherty Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thanks very much Charlie, good to see you here!
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:07 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Anna-Marie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Docherty Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Sorry Anne-Lise your comment came up as I posted my previous response and I don't know how to delete the comment below - strange one on me... Thank you for coming by to comment it's good to see you.
Docherty Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:07 AM
Thanks for running this contest - it was fun to give it a whirl...
Green Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 12:24 PM
For one line there is so much depth to this phrase. Almost as if the pain is accepted because it was expected. Not too sure if I got that right but I know what you are saying, I've been there, I just don't know how to express as well as you have.
Docherty Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Thank you, I guess sometimes life's lessons are etched to be forever remembered no matter how well fate deals next hand... To let the heart and mind bleed out has brought much inspiration to my writing along side people watching. I am sorry to hear of your plight, but to know it is past tense I hope your new hand is as good as mine...
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