Gone

Would they notice if I was gone.
It sounds just like a country song.
If they did would be relief? 
Or anger, grief, or disbelief.
Was I loved on my final rest? 
Be nice to know and not to guess.
Would they speak on my behalf? 
Would they cry? 
Would they laugh? 
Or would it be an average day? 
Close the box and walk away.
Well I had feelings and a soul.
Even brains, or so I'm told.
I even had a stupid phone.
That never rang and felt alone.
If back's and text is all I get.
Should not I feel some regret? 
I hurt myself couldn't move.
While working midnight's afternoon.
Four long years in bed with pain.
Begging GOD to take away.
Thankful for my Fam and friends
Who should stand beside me to the end
Should have my back right or wrong
Or so I thought
That's why I'm gone.
A thousand minutes 
in every day
Would have taken one.
To check on me.......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Madonsela Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Congrats on your win Anthony
Smith Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Congratulation Anthony...
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August 8, 2016 at 11:07 PM
Wow,Nao much emotion, ver well written. Congratulations!
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August 9, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Thank you Tanis Troutman
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August 8, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Anthony, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "It's Over." always & forever ~LINDA~
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July 16, 2016 at 12:47 AM
Anthony, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Fedele Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Great job.
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July 10, 2016 at 3:42 AM
Anthony , Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
August Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Thank you for all that encouragement I feel very welcomed.
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