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Gone

Left me thinking about you Out of the blue Ohh, this world is so wreck To take someone so energetic and youthful
Like you
Things I heard from your close people Made me tear-break Even though i didn't know you Still made my heart ache But you're gone now, and departed life Wish you rest in peace And save a place for me
In Paradise
Ka3bul - 29/09/2010

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Date: 1/25/2015 12:03:00 PM
It says a lot and yet doesn’t dwell on the pain. The simple words are expressive and convey strong emotions well. Emile.
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Yoni Abai
Date: 1/26/2015 7:35:00 AM
Thanks for your opinion, means alot :)

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