Gone

Left me thinking about you
Out of the blue
Ohh, this world is so wreck
To take someone so energetic and youthful
Like you
Things I heard from your close people Made me tear-break Even though i didn't know you Still made my heart ache But you're gone now, and departed life Wish you rest in peace And save a place for me
In Paradise
Ka3bul - 29/09/2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Pinet Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 12:03 PM
It says a lot and yet doesn’t dwell on the pain. The simple words are expressive and convey strong emotions well. Emile.
Abai Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Thanks for your opinion, means alot :)
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