Gone

Her tears soak her pillow at night

She is clinging on with all her might

Never wanting to let go

But knowing that it must be so.

To him she pledged her heart

Sadly he wanted to part

Now she wishes to make him stay

Its all she thinks of everyday.

so under the pale moonlight

She spends another sleepless night

Wishing for him to stay

To spend the night in his arms always.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 10, 2013 at 8:50 PM
Hannah, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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June 5, 2013 at 3:10 AM
Hannah,a lovely poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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June 4, 2013 at 9:42 PM
Hannah, a romantic ending. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda
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