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Below is the poem entitled Gone which was written by poet Carol Sunshine Brown. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Overcome by your...
shivering cold rancid breath
Death lies beside me
3rd Place Winner Brian Strand's Contest # 183 June 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 9/23/2014 11:58:00 AM
Excellent poetry. Just exactly what I needed this hot evening. Thanks for the share
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Date: 5/9/2014 6:27:00 AM
Very deep.
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:40:00 PM
wow.... a deep one here.....xox~LINDA
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Date: 11/21/2012 7:52:00 AM
wow this is powerful Carol...
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Date: 7/15/2012 6:19:00 PM
Very good keep it up caro.
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Date: 7/14/2012 1:42:00 PM
Carol I'm loving the form. You are really working it.
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Date: 7/13/2012 9:44:00 AM
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Date: 7/13/2012 8:07:00 AM
Short and sweet! Loved it! :)
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Date: 7/11/2012 2:54:00 PM
dear carol i appreciate all your comments and find your writing outstanding. yet i just write what i feel and don't feel polish with grammar and other matters dealing with the critque's of writing. God bless You with energy and strength to continue your inspirational acalades of poetrysoup writers.
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Date: 7/3/2012 8:46:00 PM
Awesome, I say you got a placement from Brian with this one. Congrats, Carol.
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Date: 7/3/2012 3:29:00 PM
Thank you Carol. You are indeed a talented poet.
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Date: 6/26/2012 10:40:00 PM
Wonderful write. Well said. tfs
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Date: 6/26/2012 7:28:00 PM
Carol you don't have to say sorry about anything. You can only do your best here. I sometimes cannot come here and I get so behind, but that is life! STay well. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/26/2012 10:37:00 AM
Thanks for your comment and yes like you I have been super busy and so behind on the soup. the traveling to babysit 3 days a week and then 2 days at the shop for my other son has this mom going full tilt. Hugs an congrats I see you won the contest. awesome. love phyl
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Date: 6/25/2012 2:06:00 PM
wow, can feel the dread
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Date: 6/22/2012 12:00:00 PM
Hey Carol, hope you had an awesome week, enjoy the weekend ahead.. Love Wilma
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Date: 6/21/2012 7:57:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations, indeed! that is awesome.
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Date: 6/21/2012 4:57:00 AM
I love this poem. In just three lines you said so much. I read it and actually shook. Congrads on your win. And thanks for reading my new orleans poem. Take care, Jancarl
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Date: 6/20/2012 5:47:00 PM
So boldly and to the point ...love it
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Date: 6/20/2012 5:32:00 PM
powerful to say the least Carol! congrats to you
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Date: 6/20/2012 1:42:00 PM
A poem so inviting. Congratulations, Ms. Carol and thank you for welcoming me here. Regards!
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Date: 6/20/2012 10:02:00 AM
grats on winner it sounds very creepy and scary i liked it very much its always nice when people dip a toe in the darkness
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Date: 6/20/2012 8:18:00 AM
Congrats on you win Carol..beautiful written poem and thank you always for your comments!!!
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Date: 6/19/2012 7:24:00 PM
Just stopping by to say HI,CArol.
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Date: 6/19/2012 7:23:00 PM
This is a magnifent little poem. To express your 'ghastly' theme so effectively in three superb lines is a wonderful achievement.
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