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Overcome by your... shivering cold rancid breath Death lies beside me 3rd Place Winner Brian Strand's Contest # 183 June 2012

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Funom Makama

Date: 9/23/2014 11:58:00 AM

Excellent poetry. Just exactly what I needed this hot evening. Thanks for the share

Kelly Elizabeth

Date: 5/9/2014 6:27:00 AM

Very deep.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2013 9:40:00 PM

wow.... a deep one here.....xox~LINDA

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/21/2012 7:52:00 AM

wow this is powerful Carol...

Omojewve Emmanuel Brown

Date: 7/15/2012 6:19:00 PM

Very good keep it up caro.

Sherese Gooden

Date: 7/14/2012 1:42:00 PM

Carol I'm loving the form. You are really working it.

David Scott

Date: 7/13/2012 9:44:00 AM

SHORT AND SWEET NICE PIECE WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN NOT HEARD FROM YOU FOR A WHILE X DAVID SCOTT

Seth C Mongrut

Date: 7/13/2012 8:07:00 AM

Short and sweet! Loved it! :)

Elijah Prophet

Date: 7/11/2012 2:54:00 PM

dear carol i appreciate all your comments and find your writing outstanding. yet i just write what i feel and don't feel polish with grammar and other matters dealing with the critque's of writing. God bless You with energy and strength to continue your inspirational acalades of poetrysoup writers.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2012 8:46:00 PM

Awesome, I say you got a placement from Brian with this one. Congrats, Carol.

Sherese Gooden

Date: 7/3/2012 3:29:00 PM

Thank you Carol. You are indeed a talented poet.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/26/2012 10:40:00 PM

Wonderful write. Well said. tfs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2012 7:28:00 PM

Carol you don't have to say sorry about anything. You can only do your best here. I sometimes cannot come here and I get so behind, but that is life! STay well. Luv, Andrea

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/26/2012 10:37:00 AM

Thanks for your comment and yes like you I have been super busy and so behind on the soup. the traveling to babysit 3 days a week and then 2 days at the shop for my other son has this mom going full tilt. Hugs an congrats I see you won the contest. awesome. love phyl

Susan Palli

Date: 6/25/2012 2:06:00 PM

wow, can feel the dread

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/22/2012 12:00:00 PM

Hey Carol, hope you had an awesome week, enjoy the weekend ahead.. Love Wilma

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/21/2012 7:57:00 AM

Wow! Congratulations, indeed! that is awesome.

Jancarl Campi

Date: 6/21/2012 4:57:00 AM

I love this poem. In just three lines you said so much. I read it and actually shook. Congrads on your win. And thanks for reading my new orleans poem. Take care, Jancarl