Russell Sivey Poet Monoku

Gone

calling the dark, dismal, fear involved, painfully grotesque, cemetery, she’s still gone

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Constance’s, “Write it on one line, Please” contest
September 7th, 2011

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Charlotte Puddifoot September 11, 2011 at 5:56 PM congrats on your win in the contest with this haunting monoku...

Lee Ramage September 11, 2011 at 12:13 AM Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

Caryl Ramsdale September 10, 2011 at 4:56 PM placement congratulations for your win in the "Write it in one line, Please" contest. CR

Kash Poet September 10, 2011 at 1:14 PM Congratulations Russell on your big win in the contest...enjoyed.

Jack Horne September 10, 2011 at 10:54 AM Many congrats for all your wins, Russell : )

Carol Sunshine Brown September 10, 2011 at 8:18 AM Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Write It In On Line, Please" contest. A very well deserved placement Russell. Love, Carol

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 10, 2011 at 7:40 AM congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!----Lori

Dr.Ram Mehta September 10, 2011 at 3:13 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance,Russell

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 10, 2011 at 12:02 AM CONGRATS RUSSELL ON THIRD PLACE WIN WITH THIS POWERFUL MONOKU LUV..

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer September 9, 2011 at 8:14 PM Russell-Nice job on this sad piece-congrats.

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2011 at 10:03 PM Dark and sad one. I like the ending very much.

Caryl Ramsdale September 8, 2011 at 7:31 PM Descriptive! Different theme for the "Write it on one line, Please" contest. Good luck...CR

Cory Long September 8, 2011 at 12:54 PM so much power in so few lines. good luck in the contest thanks for your comments always appreciated.. cory

Nette Onclaud September 8, 2011 at 11:37 AM a searin write; real deep.. winning wishes, russel..:) hugggs, nette

Kash Poet September 8, 2011 at 4:08 AM A deep write here Russell...enjoyed reading it.Thanks for your comment at my page.