Gone

calling the dark, dismal, fear involved, painfully grotesque, cemetery, she’s still gone

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Constance’s, “Write it on one line, Please” contest
September 7th, 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/11/2011 5:56:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this haunting monoku...
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Date: 9/11/2011 12:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee
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Date: 9/10/2011 4:56:00 PM
placement congratulations for your win in the "Write it in one line, Please" contest. CR
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Date: 9/10/2011 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations Russell on your big win in the contest...enjoyed.
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Date: 9/10/2011 10:54:00 AM
Many congrats for all your wins, Russell : )
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Date: 9/10/2011 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Write It In On Line, Please" contest. A very well deserved placement Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2011 7:40:00 AM
congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!----Lori
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Date: 9/10/2011 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance,Russell
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Date: 9/10/2011 12:02:00 AM
CONGRATS RUSSELL ON THIRD PLACE WIN WITH THIS POWERFUL MONOKU LUV..
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Date: 9/9/2011 8:14:00 PM
Russell-Nice job on this sad piece-congrats.
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Date: 9/8/2011 10:03:00 PM
Dark and sad one. I like the ending very much.
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Date: 9/8/2011 7:31:00 PM
Descriptive! Different theme for the "Write it on one line, Please" contest. Good luck...CR
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Date: 9/8/2011 12:54:00 PM
so much power in so few lines. good luck in the contest thanks for your comments always appreciated.. cory
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Date: 9/8/2011 11:37:00 AM
a searin write; real deep.. winning wishes, russel..:) hugggs, nette
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:08:00 AM
A deep write here Russell...enjoyed reading it.Thanks for your comment at my page.
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