Deborah Burch Poet Rhyme

Gone 2

Gone 2

My lights are on
But I'm not home
I've gone to look for me.
It's on my own
That I have gone
In hopes of finding me.
I don't recall
The time at all
When I began to seek,
Or from the wall
The picture fall
That kept me on my feet.
I only know
As on I go
If you run into me...
Just say, "Hello."
And gently show
The pathway back to me.

deborah burch©
4/11/2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown April 13, 2012 at 6:01 AM Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest P.D. sponsored "Any poem goes~" Deborah. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2012 at 10:21 PM Deborah, a wonderful congratulations.. with your awesome poem.. :-) always~ PD Deborah Burch April 12, 2012 at 10:44 PM Thank you so much PD...this was fun...the other poets participating in the fun in looking for me was such a treat! lol...I look forward to eventulally becoming a PM and doing contests, too...in the meantime y'all are doing a fabulous job!!!! big hugggsss,much love...deb

Wilma Neels April 12, 2012 at 1:57 PM Hello Deborah ;-) hmmm I really enjoyed helping you find yourself lol hope your weeks been a good one! Love Wilma Deborah Burch April 12, 2012 at 2:10 PM lol...Big Hugss Wilma!! thank you so much ;) love, deb

Anne-Lise Andresen April 11, 2012 at 3:12 PM Hello......................... wish you luck in contest!................ - oxox Anne-Lise..........see you.................hello Deborah Burch April 11, 2012 at 9:05 PM LOL...Anne Lise ....you are so very funny !!! Thank you for this laugh my dear friend :D and all your warm wishes...may the return overflowing to you,love deb...thanks for playing :D

David Williams April 11, 2012 at 12:47 PM Deb,,, hello, while you are searching for youself, have you thought about entering my contest, if you already have not,,David

Charmaine Chircop April 11, 2012 at 11:25 AM We all are in need of another to find ourselves,so it seems dear..We are all walking our path in that tunnel with light in the end.. So don't give up..keep in search and many treasures you'll find whilst you're there..Charma

S.Jagathsimhan Nair April 11, 2012 at 8:52 AM Hello, Debs, you r on the right path..don't look back, jag Deborah Burch April 11, 2012 at 10:54 AM LOL...thank you Jag!!!huggs,love deb:)

Tracy Edwards April 11, 2012 at 6:56 AM Sounds like you shoulda stayed in bed Debs lol...Nice write xxx Hugs Deborah Burch April 11, 2012 at 7:07 AM lol...what can I say Tracie...'some days are diamonds...some days are coal'...lol big huggsss girl!!! love deb