Gone

I look around this empty house It makes me want to scream and shout Where did you go? And why’d you leave me all alone Why did you leave? Was it something I did or was it me? And when you came back Gave you that slap And you admit that You got what you deserved You say let’s pretend It never happened This is the end Goodbye, please get out

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2011 5:31:00 PM

sometimes it's hard to take a stand, deep write, enjoyed this one,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2011 10:55:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Francesca. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2011 5:46:00 AM

Francesca, sometimes people who feel abandoned get angry when a loved one returns. Learning to forgive is hard, but he must have come back because he missed you and it seems he knew he did wrong. A sad poem to which many will relate. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy interacting with other poets here and thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. Best wishes, Carolyn