Gone

Gone the nights
of erotic passion, sweat mixing, loves , lubercation
as our breaths labored
we sucummb as one, limbs entwined
The bed a twister board of sorts
we play like children
and oh how i loved you then
 
Good-bye the tender touch
(I will miss that most)
your arms around me protective
gently caress, making my skin melt
losing all control of my senses
relentlessly in love with you
 
So long your electric eyes
intense they weaken me
with one look, you make me smile
we hold gazes and speak without words
and I hope you hear my observation
i am hopeless, hopelessly in love with you
 
So forever my heart will weep with the willow trees
for the death of our love, tragic
Gone is the happness just being near you brought me
good-bye the comfort of your touch
so long eutopia
guess I wanted it to much...................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 1:43 PM
Nichole, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Mason Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 3:13 PM
As I said on 3/15 this is a wonderful write here and now it is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... congratulations Nichole and good luck in the contest!!
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April 10, 2009 at 5:01 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Nichole. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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April 4, 2009 at 10:04 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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March 21, 2009 at 3:09 PM
Dear Nichole, Congradulations on YOUR POEM " Gone " being Featured this week I feel the pain of YOUR Lost Love Your feeling come in this superlative Write "we hold gazes and speak without words" I know the essence of these words My Heart for YOU ALWAYS...HG
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March 19, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations Nichole on the featuring of "Gone." Vince
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March 18, 2009 at 1:02 PM
Oh Nichole (cool spelling of your name btw) What a passionate bit of writing here...started off burning hot and sexy...and then cooled to a somber ending. Great write and congrats on being featured!! Much love, Steve
Winter Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 5:36 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
Townsend Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 5:27 PM
So much passion and love went into this one. I really like this one as I have felt this and could never have put into such lovely words. Great writing. Congratulations on being featured this week! Smiles from Lolita
Mason Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 12:49 PM
Beautiful poignant write here, Nichole and with all the love you have to give, another will find their way to bring again a happiness ... smile ... Congratulations on your writing being a feature here at the Soup this week!!
Foulk Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 2:10 PM
a poem with lots of passion and heart, so tender and warm.
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