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Gone

Gone the nights of erotic passion, sweat mixing, loves , lubercation as our breaths labored we sucummb as one, limbs entwined The bed a twister board of sorts we play like children and oh how i loved you then Good-bye the tender touch (I will miss that most) your arms around me protective gently caress, making my skin melt losing all control of my senses relentlessly in love with you So long your electric eyes intense they weaken me with one look, you make me smile we hold gazes and speak without words and I hope you hear my observation i am hopeless, hopelessly in love with you So forever my heart will weep with the willow trees for the death of our love, tragic Gone is the happness just being near you brought me good-bye the comfort of your touch so long eutopia guess I wanted it to much...................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/3/2009 1:43:00 PM
Nichole, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/27/2009 3:13:00 PM
As I said on 3/15 this is a wonderful write here and now it is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... congratulations Nichole and good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 4/10/2009 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Nichole. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2009 10:04:00 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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Date: 3/21/2009 3:09:00 PM
Dear Nichole, Congradulations on YOUR POEM " Gone " being Featured this week I feel the pain of YOUR Lost Love Your feeling come in this superlative Write "we hold gazes and speak without words" I know the essence of these words My Heart for YOU ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/19/2009 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations Nichole on the featuring of "Gone." Vince
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Date: 3/18/2009 1:02:00 PM
Oh Nichole (cool spelling of your name btw) What a passionate bit of writing here...started off burning hot and sexy...and then cooled to a somber ending. Great write and congrats on being featured!! Much love, Steve
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/16/2009 5:27:00 PM
So much passion and love went into this one. I really like this one as I have felt this and could never have put into such lovely words. Great writing. Congratulations on being featured this week! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/15/2009 12:49:00 PM
Beautiful poignant write here, Nichole and with all the love you have to give, another will find their way to bring again a happiness ... smile ... Congratulations on your writing being a feature here at the Soup this week!!
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Date: 11/19/2008 2:10:00 PM
a poem with lots of passion and heart, so tender and warm.
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