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GONE The birds have all been driven far away, we long to hear the pleasure of their trill mining has come to our small town to stay. We're covered in the dirty dust of grey, bird's habitat has vanished by the drill The birds have all been driven far away. No sight of any glint of sunlight ray it's blocked out by the drilling on the hill mining has come to our small town to stay. Parrots, finches no longer seen at play nor magpies warble songs to bring us thrill the birds have all been driven far away. Oppressive is this sombre colour grey, oh how we wish the sky with blue to fill mining has come to our small town to stay. We pray that greedy man will cease to drill and once again trees flourish on the hill, the birds have all been driven far away, mining has come to our small town to stay. Copyright © Vivien Wade Oct. 2016 A Villanelle with 10 syllable lines.

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Date: 3/4/2024 8:31:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/4/2020 6:02:00 AM
A wonderful writethanks for sharing your creativity James
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Date: 8/23/2020 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Lindsay for your comment. I enjoyed the G'day, very Australian. I wrote a poem called 'Eulogy' about the death of Common Sense. Not common these days. So many habitats destroyed. by so called progression, not only birds. Blessings, Vivien
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Date: 8/23/2020 6:51:00 PM
G'day Vivien ... before a mine begins operation a sanctuary refuge should be developed by the mining company's now, but it's obvious greed has no need for common sense. Thank you Vivien - Lindsay
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