Gone

Sometimes you just kinda open your eyes and wake up.....
And you don't know where you are.
When that happens you know you aren't where you're supposed to be.
So, you scream and you yell and hope that someone hears you.
And when they don't, you DIE.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 12:45 PM
I'm 62, married happily, have 4 kids who have 5 kids. I have a grandson who is a marine and a grandaughter in college. I've worked with kids since the mid 70's as an advocate, counselor, coach, etc. I've worked with a number of cutters in the past few years and it still angers me as the cause has never been the kid but the screwed up adults in their lives. Vince
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August 28, 2008 at 12:13 PM
Sometimes being alone and lost is a lot better than being with the ones who hurt. There is a lot of good out there, but you have to take the first steps to find it. The trick is to never never never quit. If you believe in yourself, nothing else will matter. God Bless. Vince
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