Carol Mitra Poet Rhyme

Goldilocks Zone

Goldilocks sat silent and aloof
Things were not to her liking
She wasn’t in the mood
You cant close a door once opened
So she carried on her quest
To find the perfect comfort
She put in much effort
At last when she got tired
Falling apart at the seams
She could not abolish all her dreams
She closed her eyes and searched 
with all her heart
She found the things she sought
Where actually the things 
she’d been taught
She was just a little kid 
Wanting what she did
And just got comfortable as she hid

26.03.2021
Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco

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Andrea Dietrich April 18, 2021 at 9:38 AM I am back with my congrats for your making the winners' list. Way to go, Carol. Carol Mitra April 18, 2021 at 7:02 PM Thank you dear Andrea...much love,do take care :)

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2021 at 1:50 PM So I see I am not the only one to do Goldilocks Zone different from Internet description. I LOVE your Goldilocks poem!! Carol Mitra March 28, 2021 at 6:10 PM Thank you dear Andrea...I generally have my own take on my imagination....I am glad you liked it....much love :)

M. L. Kiser March 27, 2021 at 11:55 AM Beautifully crafted piece, good luck in the contest. Carol Mitra March 27, 2021 at 6:23 PM Thank you....much appreciated.

JC Brul March 26, 2021 at 8:34 PM Beautiful composition dear Carol..Simple yet profound! Best wishes in the contest! Carol Mitra March 26, 2021 at 9:07 PM Thank you JCB...much appreciated...Take care :)

Gordon Mcconnell March 26, 2021 at 7:24 AM Nice piece Carol, fine penning with good rhyme and flow along with good imagery too. Hope all is well in India, best wishes from Scotland, Gordon Carol Mitra March 26, 2021 at 9:27 AM Thank you dear Gordon...All good in India....best wishes to you too, take care :)