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Goldilock's Little Dears

She peeked through the keyhole espying a messy cool lair she ate up the tiniest bowl she could find disheveled, disarrayed, disordered were they with wild hair She chose a tiny seat and turned a bears world upside down smash went the wood, and he howled grungy, grimy and grubby were they and sadly they frowned She cleaned up there mess though she caused them distress come the night, the little wee bed fit just right muddled, mussed and mussy were they but also such bless She learned how to live in a world full of bears in plain sight though she called them all "dears, " it was the baby bear she called, beautiful, beloved and bright

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Date: 4/18/2021 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your story/write and picture. Have a blessed day................
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Date: 4/6/2021 7:51:00 AM
Love your story telling my friend..
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Date: 4/6/2021 2:30:00 AM
Lovely tale and a classic to be cherished. Love this. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/5/2021 3:52:00 PM
Hi Mystic, You endearingly retold the classic story. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Well done. I hope you a wonderful Easter weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/5/2021 2:23:00 PM
- Goldilocks and the Three Bears is one of my favorite fairy tale ... and I love your also, Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/5/2021 2:21:00 PM
Dear Poet, this is such a delightful poem - a variation from the original has made it even more adorable! Enjoyed immensely. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 4/5/2021 11:26:00 AM
Hi Rose, I loved your poem: She learned how to live in a world full of bears in plain sight though she called them all "dears, " it was the baby bear she called, beautiful, beloved and bright I really enjoyed it, very well done. Warm Hugs//Lasaad
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Date: 4/5/2021 10:35:00 AM
Such a sweet poem about Goldilocks and the three bears. I enjoyed it immensely. So pleased "she cleaned up their mess" because, after all, she was an intruder! She owed it to them. Nice work, Mystic Rose Rose
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Date: 4/5/2021 10:32:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose Rose, I do not blame her to chose the baby bear. I hape you had a Happy Easter. Enjoy your day my friend.
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