Goldfish Swimming In My Mind Today

There are goldfish swimming in the recesses of my dendrite pool.
They are flashing their tails and being ever so cool.
I am trying to ignore them, thinking they might go away.
Trixie is laughing, for they very much want to play.

Okay. I say, just for a second or two, 
Then frankly, I have a bit of work to do.
The fish are sassy, funny and smart.
They laugh and include themselves in my art.

I am drawing them now as they splash and they wiggle.
They have enormous gold eyes, these fish that so giggle.
These goldfish have taken me hostage today in my mind.
I guess a poem about them would to myself be a bit kind.

So here, goldfish.  Here you go, a poem about you.
I have drawn you a canvas and given you fish food too.
Here you go, goldfish. Wait. You want to be king?
There is somebody already there. Okay. You want to sing?

They are singing a song now, serenading themselves and me too.
There is nothing like goldfish, Fish One and Fish Two.
They are smiling so wide, their gills waving and flapping.
I cannot help but be amused, and now they are clapping.

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Date: 3/26/2019 5:22:00 AM
A vision of goldfish clapping...well, they are happy little fish, e.g., goldfish. Cute!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/26/2019 9:27:00 AM
They are, and they have taken me hostage in their happy pure ways.
Date: 3/25/2019 10:29:00 PM
Now I'm clapping, too!! This poem is an utter delight... and I can't help but add it to my overflowing FAVE list! Absolutely enchanting poem, my friend!! ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/26/2019 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Rhona. My fav list is so long it is ridiculous!
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