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Bowl of roiling coy seething flames boiling over bubbling water

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/6/2009 8:34:00 AM
Very pretty haiku. Pls notice that the 3rd line has to be 5 syl. to read as: bubbling hot water ...accordingly. I'm looking for more haiku to read from you. All the best.
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