Goldfinch Pair Visit

lovely write, my friend - I couild see those birds : ) We have goldfinches here, occasionally - mostly rooks, crows etc though, lol.

Nice poem about our feathered friends. Hope you and yours are well. Autumn is coming in! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

cute tale of your little birds. They are kinda like our outdoor pets, aren't they?

Excellent haiku enjoyed. Penned with sweet imagination. Loved always,bl

Excellent and vibrant set of perfect haiku. Enjoyed very much! Always, Laura

This is a beautiful scene here Sara! I really enjoyed the elaborate display of the birdbath and small birds that want to get in! I understand how the birds do this, we see them playing all the time, wanting to get birdseed but not sure if its safe or not, until they get used to it then they have no problems with it! What a wonderful piece my friend! Great Work!!

Sara I like this vision of our tiny birds..David have just been reading your contest rules, am I right in saying you want a 10 line para, no syll, count and then an 8 line line poem with a syll count of 8,6,8,6,8,6,8,6 and line 2,4,6,8, must rhyme, or am I way off base?..David