Lindsay Laurie Poet Rhyme

Goldfinch

On cleared and cultivated land,
exotic weeds and thistle stand,
whose seed is sought in great demand,
so farmers gain a helping hand.

This alien now does belong;
common is this bird’s distinctive song.
Spring courtship and a breeding throng;
autumn flocks keep bonding strong.

A buffy wash midst shades of brown,
and red-faced with a blackened crown,
gold bars on wings; prefer a town, 
Goldfinches never let us down.

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Janice Canerdy July 29, 2019 at 8:00 AM This is so well-written and enjoyable, Lindsay! Janice Lindsay Laurie July 30, 2019 at 9:16 PM Hello Janice … Thanks for reading and posting a comment. I do appreciate it - Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2019 at 2:30 PM a cute tribute to this bird, Lindsay. Birds are so amazing when you think of all the colors and types of them! Lindsay Laurie July 30, 2019 at 9:14 PM Hello Andrea … once I kept aviary birds Andrea, but once I realized how much better it was to enjoy birds in their natural environment, I changed. Make conditions right with shrubs in your garden and birds will come to you - thank you Andrea - Lindsay

Gordon Mcconnell July 27, 2019 at 3:46 PM A superb piece of writing Lindsay, holding up the goldfish so elegantly to see it in its beauty. Great stuff! Lindsay Laurie July 30, 2019 at 8:41 PM Hello Gordon … thank you Gordon for your kind comment. I'm pleased you enjoyed this verse about the goldfinch - thankyou Gordon - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos July 27, 2019 at 2:26 AM What an awesome bird you write of - a goldfinch - and you describe with perfect rhyme - this is not your fist tribute to life in the Australian bush and I am with you all the way, as I see beauty and exotic bird and wildlife in our South African continent - great poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Lindsay Laurie July 30, 2019 at 8:37 PM Hello Jennifer … Yes Jennifer, I do enjoy what we have around us and love to write about it. As you possibly know, I have enjoyed many of your nature verses too - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay

Timothy Mcguire July 24, 2019 at 11:11 PM I absolutely love the rhythm and message of this one. Good Job Lindsay Lindsay Laurie July 30, 2019 at 8:34 PM G'day Timothy … thanks for your kind comment Timothy. I appreciate your support - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf July 24, 2019 at 7:39 PM I'll take the gold; you can have the finch. Ha, ha. Just kidding. Enjoyed this piece, as always. G'day ~ Gershon Lindsay Laurie July 30, 2019 at 8:32 PM Hello Gershon … there's very little gold on them, but their song and presence is very welcome - thank you Gershon - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta July 24, 2019 at 6:37 PM Carduelis tristis is not a sad case, but has trills to thrill! Aloha! Rico Lindsay Laurie July 30, 2019 at 8:29 PM Hello Rico … the introduced goldfinch here is the European Goldfinch (Carduelis carduelis) and most certainly is a songbird and welcome guest - thank you Rico - Lindsay

Connie Marcum Wong July 24, 2019 at 5:18 PM Lindsay, your rhyming is always superb, never forced and you celebrate this little bird with all the majesty it is deserving of! I loved it! : ) xxoo Lindsay Laurie July 30, 2019 at 8:24 PM Hello Connie … thank you once again Connie. I'm pleased you liked my little goldfinch verse - Lindsay

Tom Cunningham July 24, 2019 at 8:26 AM Nice tribute to a beautiful bird Lindsay. Lindsay Laurie July 30, 2019 at 8:22 PM Thank you for reading Tom. Yes it is such an inoffensive bird of beauty - Lindsay

Heidi Sands July 24, 2019 at 7:37 AM I enjoyed seeing the goldfinch recently here. Very nice poem :) Lindsay Laurie July 30, 2019 at 8:20 PM Hello Heidi … the goldfinch is truly a beautiful bird that brings me joy to see in the garden - thank you Heidi - Lindsay