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Image result for pictures of crows and pecan trees early in the morningWritten: 09/09/2026

golden sun

golden sun rises through webworm's web on pecans.... crows wait harvest
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Kerr Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 11:17 PM
A golden haiku I speak in glowing terms of and always will, Sara. Delightful twist closing the poem is quite superb.🔥✨⭐ I love every word and line. Hk
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 5:02 AM
Why, thank you, Howard. I am delighted you liked the juxtaposition. 👍⭐. Sara K.
Wolf Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 8:00 PM
That second line really captures 'a moment' for me. I love viewing the sun through webs, and other linear-type obstructions. Thanks! ~ Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 4:59 AM
Yes, those webs can be alluring, Gershon. I have a time or two taken pictures of spider webs then once I put a piece of poster board behind on and spray painted to capture the pattern on the board. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara K.
Onclaud Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 3:36 PM
autumn's harvest time beckons...don't crows ravage the bounty? a beauty, sara
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 4:11 PM
Nette, they can really take away a large portion of the harvest as well as black birds. The nuts are not so easy for them to open though. I appreciate the time spent here. 👍⭐. Sara K.
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September 9, 2026 at 9:50 AM
Lovely haiku Sara. Ravens will definitely have a harvest & can sleep off for rest of the day.
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 4:10 PM
It will be easy pickings for them but trying to crack them won't be so easy, Mohan. They can handle it though. Thanks for the nice review. 👍⭐. Sara K.
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