Golden Sun

Let the 
bright 
emanantioms 
    of 
    the 
     sun 
shine on us
     let one 
thousand light - years 
come between us
let the depths of 
          space 
          open before us
we'll learn
we'll learn
we'll learn 
about the cosmos 
           Let 
           peace 
           reign 
      over the cities,
the forests, the valleys 
and the verdant hillls
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Horsman Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 5:51 AM
I like to take in the early poems here on soup, not disappointed with this wonderful free verse poem. harry
Rider Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 11:44 AM
Such a peaceful read, very well done. And thank you also for you welcome comments today. ~Trudy~
Yates Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 3:08 PM
Beautiful and so peaceful... great write!
Chircop Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:59 PM
recomment--applaude for your dad--and for you too matthew---and thanks for your comments--charma:)
Bellefleur Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:37 PM
well done - has a feeling of eternal bliss..
Carty Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 2:13 PM
beautiful, nice read well done.
Chircop Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 1:53 PM
i love your golden sun-----------awesome dear matthew --charma
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