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Poetic Form: Kimo
Inspired: 2024 August 07
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Wouldst thou lean ye summer blaze generous thoust wilt naught as sea douse thee cooly soaked ... or wake up Wouldst in yawning amidst kerfuffle cord freed in time broadcast air curtain's [drawn--(saddened face]--rain) Yea nay to sun, nay yea to rain but then yea nay to work, still again nay nay to fun ... that's life

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Date: 8/7/2024 2:58:00 PM
Thanks for sharing Hilo poet. Made me chuckle.
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Date: 8/7/2024 10:58:00 PM
A chuckle be the trend lest swayed guffaw be its end. Aloha Willliam

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