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Poetic Form: Kimo
Inspired: 2024 August 07
Image: N/A
 

Golden Summer Blues

Wouldst thou lean ye summer blaze generous 
thoust wilt naught as sea douse thee
cooly soaked ... or wake up

Wouldst in yawning amidst kerfuffle cord
freed in time broadcast air
curtain's [drawn--(saddened face]--rain)

Yea nay to sun, nay yea to rain  but then
yea nay to work, still again
nay nay to fun ... that's life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bartley Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 2:58 PM
Thanks for sharing Hilo poet. Made me chuckle.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 10:58 PM
A chuckle be the trend lest swayed guffaw be its end. Aloha Willliam
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