Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

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Feb 26, 2026               6.30pm

NOT FOR THE FLOWERING CONTEST. CAME LATE. JUST POSTING TO SHARE THIS PRETTY FLOWER

Golden Showers

Petals of gladness bloom
cascading down to exude iridescent smile
no gloom

nature’s pure bliss
transcends at heart’s space a long while
don’t miss

behold
chandelier’s style
gold 

Petals of gladness bloom
a fortune from trees’ crowns in file
gold

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Paula Goldsmith February 26, 2026 at 12:13 PM WOW!!! What a beautiful write with a pretty yellow tree picture. I enjoyed reading. Love This... Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away............ Len Gasun February 26, 2026 at 11:26 PM Thanks a lot for reading and enjoying this short piece. God bless Hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 26, 2026 at 8:08 AM Dear Len, this poem feels like a small cascade of light. Those golden petals, part chandelier, part blessing, gives the whole piece a gentle lift. What a bright, joyful moment on the page. Blessings, Len Daniel Len Gasun February 26, 2026 at 11:24 PM Thank you so much for reading my poem and your kind & inspiring words dear poet friend, Daniel. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues February 26, 2026 at 4:02 AM I like the comparison to a golden chandelier! Len Gasun February 26, 2026 at 11:11 PM Thank you dear for liking it and for stopping by to read this poem inspired by this pretty flower. Blessings. Hugs