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Golden Rendezvous

Oh morning sun, you wake me with your smile Uplifted by your golden rendezvous I glow in harmony as you beguile In streams of light enlisted by your style I bathe in brilliant warmth of your review Oh morning sun, you wake me with your smile I know that you are with me all the while As shadow dancers marry me to you I glow in harmony as you beguile I look upon your radiant profile I wonder as you splendidly break through Oh morning sun, you wake me with your smile At last to find the darkness in exile To walk my path with energy anew I glow in harmony as you beguile I rouse from dazzling dreams to reconcile To find you gazing , bidding night adieu Oh morning sun, you wake me with your smile I glow in harmony as you beguile

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/11/2019 11:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Mike. Well penned.

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/12/2019 6:31:00 AM

Thanks so much Line xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2019 7:37:00 PM

Mike this is utterly beautiful. I adore the sun, so this is one of my favorites on the list. Congrats for your win.

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/26/2019 8:37:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/26/2019 6:32:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Mike! :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/26/2019 7:06:00 PM

Thanks so much Heidi xxoo Happy Saturday!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/26/2019 5:51:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Mike! Beautiful! Janice

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/26/2019 7:06:00 PM

Thanks Janice, Congratulations to you as well xxoo

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 1/26/2019 2:40:00 PM

Very pretty and poetic Villanelle. Congrats!

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/26/2019 2:43:00 PM

Thanks so much Dale!!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/21/2019 11:56:00 PM

Very beautiful poetry!

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2019 7:17:00 AM

Thank you so much Arthur!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/21/2019 10:31:00 AM

It's a special treat to read uplifting poems like this, Mike. Thank you for setting the tone today. If for Nina's contest, it should do very well! Best wishes, Carolyn

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2019 12:54:00 PM

Thanks so much Carolyn, so sweet of you to say xxoo

Silent One

Date: 1/19/2019 8:54:00 AM

You did this form so well, great lines that flows so well.. Nice one Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/19/2019 11:20:00 AM

Thanks so much Silent One!!! Happy Saturday

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/19/2019 12:19:00 AM

This is delightful, my favorite so far. My perspective may not aid in the contest, but it brought me a lot of joy while reading this lovely Villanelle (eventually, I'm sure I'll learn to spell that w/o looking). The iambic seems right on. Lovely poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/19/2019 8:40:00 AM

Thank you so much CayCay, your opinion means a lot!!! I am so glad that you liked it xxoo

Charles Messina

Date: 1/18/2019 10:22:00 PM

Hey Mike, I never heard of this form (villanelle) I am tempted to try one after reading your wonderful poem. Very nice! Have a nice weekend...Charlie

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/19/2019 8:39:00 AM

Thank you Charlie, I had not heard of it either and it was great fun to try !! Have a great weekend as well!!