Golden Rain

The rain is jealous
As the leaves fall from their trees
Golden drops of fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Murphy Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 5:06 AM
very nice I enjoyed this one best wishes to you faleshia
Taylor Avatar
September 4, 2010 at 8:03 PM
Outstanding haiku, Larry. Enjoyed. Ralph
Mehta Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 6:45 PM
Very nice comparision between the two, Larry
Musaddeq Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 3:00 PM
O amazing composition, love it.
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