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Golden Leaf Floats

golden leaf floats
atop murky water-
blissful detachment

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Bite Size Poem #32 
7.01.2021

10th gradehaiku

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Line Gauthier

November 12, 2022 at 1:24 PM

Lovely, Rama ~

Kim Merryman

January 21, 2022 at 9:53 AM

A wonderful haiku, Rama! Congrats on your HM! Blessings, Kim M

Rama Balasubramanian

January 21, 2022 at 5:40 PM

Thanks. God bless!

Paula Goldsmith

January 20, 2022 at 8:45 AM

Congratulations on your win. Yes, pretty leaves in water swimming away. Have a blessed day............

Rama Balasubramanian

January 21, 2022 at 6:37 AM

Thanks

Christuraj Alex

January 10, 2022 at 12:43 AM

Typical Indian philosophical thought. Congratulations !

Rama Balasubramanian

January 21, 2022 at 6:37 AM

Thanks

Karen Croft

January 8, 2022 at 8:10 PM

Congrats on your win. I can actually see this visually!

Rama Balasubramanian

January 9, 2022 at 10:39 AM

Thanks

Paulette Calasibetta

January 8, 2022 at 8:55 AM

Your imagery delightful! Congratulations on your win! :) Paulette

Rama Balasubramanian

January 9, 2022 at 10:38 AM

Thanks

Tom Cunningham

January 7, 2022 at 12:54 AM

A lovely nature scene Rama, hope you're keeping well. Tom

Rama Balasubramanian

January 7, 2022 at 10:09 AM

Thanks. I am fine. Hope the same with you

Joanna Daniel

January 6, 2022 at 9:08 PM

A lovely haiku, Rama, hope you and your family are doing well:) New year wishes:)

Rama Balasubramanian

January 7, 2022 at 10:08 AM

Thanks. Wishing you too the same.

Golden Leaf Floats

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