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golden jubilee

golden jubilee...
elderly couple
with toothless smile



Placement:3rd (Feb.2012)

Contest:Your Verse Again(max 12 lines)

Sponsor:Brian Strand

By:kashinath karmakar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 2/9/2012 11:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kash! I hope this is me with my husband one day BUT with dentures. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/7/2012 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Kash
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Date: 2/2/2012 12:52:00 PM
This is such a sweet write-- yes how lucky to grow old together ;) thanks for the tip on my sonnet-- you're right, I just have to think how to revise it-- I think I have to sleep on it :D
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:05:00 AM
come out, come out wherever you are! :)
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Date: 1/31/2012 2:27:00 AM
Kash, I am sure you would love the Sunshine Coast - beautiful beaches and white sand. I had to laugh at your Golden Jubilee poem. We don't see many toothless people here, but I guess there are plenty where you are. Cheers, Maureen
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Date: 1/30/2012 9:04:00 PM
kashi buddy, waiting for your new one... span will beat you! :) huggs!
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Date: 1/30/2012 5:54:00 PM
hey, I just saw your son win a contest, but it looks like you had not even entered it. I saw his last name and at first thought I was congratulating YOU. wEll, off to the gym now. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/30/2012 7:58:00 AM
Brought to mind an elderly couple on a clapboard porch with lemonade watching a sunset. But that could just be me...I rather fancy lemonade. ;-)
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Date: 1/29/2012 11:58:00 PM
absolutely charming , kashi buddy... no dentures??.. come visit! :) huggs!
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Date: 1/29/2012 9:39:00 PM
Kash, so were the results completely accurate?
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Date: 1/29/2012 7:49:00 PM
aaawww, sooo sweet! thank you for stopping by and your kind comments Kash
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Date: 1/29/2012 6:22:00 PM
Lol love it. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/29/2012 5:33:00 PM
awwww, I can just picture this. So cute. For some reason, a chinese couple comes to my mind! So will you reveal your quiz answers to ME? heeheee. It's been so long that I took that quiz, I have now forgotten the names that came to my mind and I can't take it again, because once you know how it works, you cannot take it fairly again. well, I'm OUTTA here.
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Date: 1/29/2012 1:04:00 PM
Smile.....good kash.oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/29/2012 12:59:00 PM
What wonderful poetry you all are sharing today. I enjoyed reading yours Kash. Hope the coming week finds you in good health and your life full of joy and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2012 12:51:00 PM
Kash great haiku, am smiling but thankfully not toothless..David
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Date: 1/29/2012 12:41:00 PM
Smile ˜ I remember when I was young I would see these what some in society would look upon in their narrow and shallow views as outcast amid some blurried tainted light; precious and priceless lifes * Blessed to have found the joy of one anothers love to share and would think, how wonderfull; especially considering they whom thought themselves to be but beautiful; finding themselves all alone in their beds at night ˜ My love, Always, John!:) *
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Date: 1/29/2012 12:43:00 PM
...I should have added, maybe not alone but, alone inside ˜