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Golden Grotto

through a small portal bringing light to the grotto glorious sunshine

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2010 1:23:00 PM

I really liked it. Didn't it win anything? And you used "gold" in your haiku like I did! Hope you are having a nice day, margaret. LUv, andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/21/2010 10:19:00 PM

A fine haiku with good images. Good luck in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/21/2010 10:19:00 PM

Very expressive title,

Kim M

Date: 4/21/2010 9:33:00 PM

I appreciate the image of the grotto receiving glorious sunshine through a small opening. Describes the photo precisely.

Date: 4/21/2010 7:42:00 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Like the uplifting view. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Rick Parise

Date: 4/21/2010 7:29:00 PM

A place of praise~Tasty~Excellent!!!! blessings to you and yours! Rick

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/21/2010 6:55:00 PM

You work very well in the haiku form, Margaret, and this is an excellent description of Raul's photo. Wishing you luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn