Golden Grotto

through a small portal

bringing light to the grotto

glorious sunshine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 1:23 PM
I really liked it. Didn't it win anything? And you used "gold" in your haiku like I did! Hope you are having a nice day, margaret. LUv, andrea
Mehta Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 10:19 PM
A fine haiku with good images. Good luck in the contest
Mehta Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 10:19 PM
Very expressive title,
M Avatar
April 21, 2010 at 9:33 PM
I appreciate the image of the grotto receiving glorious sunshine through a small opening. Describes the photo precisely.
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April 21, 2010 at 7:42 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Like the uplifting view. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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April 21, 2010 at 6:55 PM
You work very well in the haiku form, Margaret, and this is an excellent description of Raul's photo. Wishing you luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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