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On a cloudless, sapphire sky afternoon, frosty and cold, Yesterday's snowflakes sparkle, awash in sunshine gold, Redbird sings from its powdery tree, on the white lawn, With deepest of regrets, that all the flowers have gone. Scarlet sunset will be coming soon, red roses in the sky, The golden hands of the clock, always lead to goodbye. Laughter from a distance, there is sledding on Plum Hill, Just a short amount of time, from pearl moonlight thrill.

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Date: 7/4/2022 12:58:00 PM
A wonderful write/picture. Time is a funny thing. Guess we will never really understand it. Have a great/blessed day writing away............
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/4/2022 1:45:00 PM
Time is so elusive, like the future and the past, always just out of reach. All we have is the moment, which is gone before we know it. Thank you for your very nice comments. Have a blessed holiday. :)
Date: 6/27/2022 1:38:00 PM
You’ve interwoven time and seasons together and with all its lovely colors! A thrilling piece! A fave!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/27/2022 3:41:00 PM
Thank you very much for the delight of your comments, and for the honor of your fave. :)
Date: 6/27/2022 1:30:00 AM
Interesting theme of time, blending in with a wintry season. The poetry as always, wonderful. Harry.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/27/2022 10:44:00 AM
I appreciate that, Harry. Hope your day is a nice one, Evelyn :)
Date: 6/27/2022 1:27:00 AM
There is always a thrill when I read your poems.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/27/2022 10:42:00 AM
That's so nice to know. Thank you. :)
Date: 6/26/2022 7:12:00 PM
What?! Summer's over?! ... Whew, 'tis only the clock that's broken. Chuckle, gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/28/2022 5:14:00 PM
Ha, ha! Just make sure that your 'sudden shine to winter' exits as quickly as it entered! lol. Write on, Evelyn. :) gw
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/26/2022 8:50:00 PM
No worries, Gershon. Memories of childhood sledding caused me to take a sudden 'shine' to a wintry topic. :D
Date: 6/26/2022 6:43:00 PM
There is a certain sadness I read between these lines. Nicely written, Evelyn.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/26/2022 8:30:00 PM
One can't help feeling a bit sad when thinking of time's passage, and those we've loved and lost. Thank you for the lovely compliment.