Golden Eagle

dusk’s gold skydives
          hush-slicing river’s silver ~
                                fish take flight


1/10/22
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Lawless Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 6:10 PM
Quite an interesting twist at the end of this, a nice bit of word play
Woodrow Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 10:21 PM
thank you John....glad you saw that :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2022 at 4:23 AM
Awesome haiku and a bit of a tongue twister!
Woodrow Avatar
February 15, 2022 at 7:06 PM
thank you. :)
Horsman Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 10:05 PM
Yes an action poem, brings to life how it is. Great haiku.
Woodrow Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 7:13 AM
thank you :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 1:03 PM
Wonderful imagery in this lovely haiku Susan. Blessings xxoo
Woodrow Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 1:44 PM
Hi Connie! glad you liked it :) thank you :)
Sambourne Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 5:14 PM
You've captured a remarkable image here with a golden eagle on the hunt. Superb! Best wishes, Brian
Woodrow Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 1:43 PM
thank you, Brian :)
Szoke Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 1:16 AM
Very beautiful, quite reflective of the beauty of this bird.
Woodrow Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 4:04 PM
thank you :)
Allison Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 12:56 PM
Excellent imagery Susan, a joy to read:-) hugs Jan xx
Woodrow Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 1:08 PM
thank you Jan .. glad you enjoyed it :)
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