Billie Jama Poet Haiku

Golden Confetti

               
                 
                              sunlight skims the stream
                          buttercups like gold 
                                c o n f e t t i
                                     f
                                       a
                                          l
                                            l 
                              from heaven’s hand

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Joanna Daniel April 21, 2025 at 12:26 AM Beautiful, Billie, congratulations:) Billie Jama April 21, 2025 at 12:47 AM Thank you, much appreciated

Edward Ibeh April 20, 2025 at 6:45 PM Wonderfully written, Billie. Enjoyed the read very much. Happy Easter! Billie Jama April 20, 2025 at 10:20 PM Thank you kindly, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Happy Easter

Ink Empress April 20, 2025 at 2:52 AM So creative how youv written this hiku! I love how subtle and seamless an softly your alliterations flow as well as how youv written “buttercups like gold c o n f e t t i” i love when you paint imagery you do it in unique artistic ways. Just gorgeous sis! Last week was worlds haiku day, maybe i should write one too! Pleasure visiting your poem! Best wishes! Sending you light always Billie Jama April 20, 2025 at 3:20 AM Thank you sis. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the hiku and the imagery I tried to create. I don't know that it was was world haiku day last week I'll keep that in mind moving forward. I’d love to see your hiku too! It’s such a beautiful way to express ourselves. Sending light and love your way always.