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Golden Butterfly Collaboration

Fluttered by the golden butterfly, do her wings have glitter and dye. She uttered as she flew away, see you another day. Heard on his breath uttered fluttered dove, whispered timid stuttered muttered love. Butterflies and doves flying by, high up in the blue sky. Date Written: 9/16/2020 Honorable Mention MAX 14 lines POEM-inspired prompt Contest Judged:10/12/2020 Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/22/2020 10:21:00 PM

A lovely combination of two most loved creatures in this world. ~~

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/23/2020 8:55:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like it. You are so right, they are the two most loved creatures in this world. Have a wonderful day...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2020 10:54:00 AM

this is sweet as can be. I like how you did the collaboration.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/19/2020 11:23:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this write. Enjoy your day.............

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/18/2020 3:28:00 PM

stirring the senses, paula... haven't seen this contest but i'm sure you'll fly with this one...huggs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/19/2020 10:53:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. It was fun to write. You have a wonderful day with hugs.............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/16/2020 3:53:00 PM

This lovely, Paula with such a creative format. Sending best wishes on butterfly wings for the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/17/2020 11:40:00 AM

Thank You, for reading and for your best wishes. So glad you like this write. Enjoy your day...............

Jan Allison

Date: 9/16/2020 1:34:00 PM

i love butterfly poems Paula:-) hugs jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/16/2020 1:50:00 PM

Thank You, for reading and for writing. I also love butterflies. So glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day with hugs.............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/16/2020 12:31:00 PM

- A lovely gem, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/16/2020 1:48:00 PM

Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this. You have a wonderful day with hugs.............

V. Deepa

Date: 9/16/2020 12:25:00 PM

Wow ..wonderful imagery dear Paula mam:-) Butterflies and doves love them both..it looks peaceful when they fly in sky..Enjoyed your muse..:-)Keep writing and Keep inspiring..Take care.Have a beautiful day:-)Much love~Deepa:-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/16/2020 1:46:00 PM

Thank You, for reading and for writing your kind words. Glad you like this one. You have a wonderful day with blessings.........