Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Golden Butterfly Collaboration

Fluttered by the golden butterfly,                                                                   do her wings have glitter and dye.                                                                 She uttered as she flew away,                                                                       see you another day.                                                                                    Heard on his breath uttered fluttered dove,                                                       whispered timid stuttered muttered love.                                                      Butterflies and doves flying by,                                                                    high up in the blue sky.  



Date Written: 9/16/2020

Honorable Mention     MAX 14 lines POEM-inspired prompt Contest 
Judged:10/12/2020 Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Victor Buhagiar September 22, 2020 at 10:21 PM A lovely combination of two most loved creatures in this world. ~~ Paula Goldsmith September 23, 2020 at 8:55 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like it. You are so right, they are the two most loved creatures in this world. Have a wonderful day...............

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2020 at 10:54 AM this is sweet as can be. I like how you did the collaboration. Paula Goldsmith September 19, 2020 at 11:23 AM Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like this write. Enjoy your day.............

Nette Onclaud September 18, 2020 at 3:28 PM stirring the senses, paula... haven't seen this contest but i'm sure you'll fly with this one...huggs Paula Goldsmith September 19, 2020 at 10:53 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. It was fun to write. You have a wonderful day with hugs.............

Sam Kauffman September 16, 2020 at 3:53 PM This lovely, Paula with such a creative format. Sending best wishes on butterfly wings for the contest. Paula Goldsmith September 17, 2020 at 11:40 AM Thank You, for reading and for your best wishes. So glad you like this write. Enjoy your day...............

Jan Allison September 16, 2020 at 1:34 PM i love butterfly poems Paula:-) hugs jan xx Paula Goldsmith September 16, 2020 at 1:50 PM Thank You, for reading and for writing. I also love butterflies. So glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day with hugs.............

Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2020 at 12:31 PM - A lovely gem, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith September 16, 2020 at 1:48 PM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this. You have a wonderful day with hugs.............

V. Deepa September 16, 2020 at 12:25 PM Wow ..wonderful imagery dear Paula mam:-) Butterflies and doves love them both..it looks peaceful when they fly in sky..Enjoyed your muse..:-)Keep writing and Keep inspiring..Take care.Have a beautiful day:-)Much love~Deepa:-) Paula Goldsmith September 16, 2020 at 1:46 PM Thank You, for reading and for writing your kind words. Glad you like this one. You have a wonderful day with blessings.........