Golden Army

The Soldiers of light,
Breach the barricade of clouds:
Shadows of freedom.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 4:01 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
Chircop Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 5:39 PM
Raul..Where have you been?You've been gone for so long,maybe its time to come home.What an amazing haiku this is..Give us more -Charma : )
Moreno Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 3:01 PM
I have been great, I stop by from time to time to read. I do miss writing along side you guys. Merry Christmas...
Rogers Blk Panther Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 6:26 AM
What a cool Haiku poem. You'll never bore your self. Keep on TRUCKIN Raul. VAL ROGERS
Moreno Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 4:28 AM
Thanks Val, I try not to bore myself but sometimes it spontaneously happens. All the best, Merry Christmas!
Allison Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 5:25 PM
such beautiful imagery:-) hugs jan xx
Moreno Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 4:24 AM
Thank you Jan.
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