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Writing Challenge - G Words - Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France 

 

Poem written- 25th June 2023

 

 

 

Golden

Golden are those with benevolent souls Wonderful people, blissful in their roles They've not passed exams, but offer their all In favours they do, whatever the call. The elderly lady, who's lame of limb For the needy she brings groceries in She's knocking on their doors day after day For to check that her neighbours are ok. She does not ask for any gratitude Helping others brings her beatitude All she could ask for is to be sure that They're safe, joyful and cared for, that's a fact. Golden oldies, that's including men too To pay everyone their own rightful due They’ve a gentle heart and a gentle hand A hand to hold, a heart to understand. A caring man close to my heart and home Wouldn't wish anyone sat hungry alone He cooked for two sweet dears on Christmas Day Such deeds touch hearts in a delightful way. Smiles, a helping hand or lending an ear Gifts someone magic each day of the year.
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Congratulations on your win in the Contest.. Belle. Nice poem.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 12:42 AM
Thank you kindly Alfonso, appreciated… Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I really enjoyed reading it again. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Edmonds  Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 2:32 PM
Thank you Paula, I’m pleased you enjoyed the read again. Have a blessed weekend yourself. Belle
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 3:45 PM
Congratulations Belle on the win. Beautiful poem, really nice. Thanks.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 2:31 PM
Thank you very much Maria, so appreciated. Belle
Poet Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 3:36 PM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your contest win with this lovely poem, Belle.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Thank you Sotto, your support is truly appreciated. Belle
Lindley Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:39 PM
And such are rewarded for their good deeds. Great poetry my friend. A fav.. God bless...
Lindley Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 4:59 AM
yes, that my friend is so true. But true poets read and understand, often are helped greatly by doing so. I know that is true for me. God bless...
Edmonds  Avatar
June 28, 2023 at 1:53 AM
Thank younso much Robert for commenting and the fave, so many good souls go unnoticed who are worthy of some praise… Belle
M  Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Belle a lovely write…simply golden! Loved it! Debx
Edmonds  Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 12:56 PM
Thank you so much Deb, truly appreciated… Belle x
Andresen Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 1:22 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Belle - Deserves a golden place on the winners list, good luck :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 12:55 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise very much indeed. Hugs in return, Belle :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:07 AM
Your "Golden" is a wonderful write. Love It. Good Luck. I also did this one with God. Have a great day/week............
Edmonds  Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 12:18 AM
Thank you so much Paula, I’ve read your entry into Constance’s contest, it’s terrific. Have a lovely week yourself ~ Belle
Poet Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 4:32 AM
Oh, how splendidly you have woven words together, dear, Belle! Your mastery of language captivates the reader, leading them on a profound journey of the golden souls and benevolent people. May you and Alan be well? Your poem is a testament to the existence of kindness in our world.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 12:15 AM
Thank you so much Sotto, the world needs love and kindnesses more than ever with all the troubles and difficulties being presented. Thank you also for wishing me and Alan well, it’s appreciated… Belle
Buhagiar Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 10:59 PM
Dear Belle, I hope you are feeling better. Your poem deserves a POTD for its content. It shows there are still kind persons in this world.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 1:35 AM
Dear Victor, I’m still suffering from anxiety due to all that’s gone over the past eighteen months with Alan and his health issues, and what’s going on in the world doesn’t help. But I’m still standing, still smiling and doing my bit to aid anyone that needs me. Bless you, Belle
Rolland Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 5:07 PM
beautiful, there are good thoughts to share in town have a good we
Edmonds  Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 5:17 PM
Thank you and bless you Yann… Belle
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