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golden ball of light hidden by a rush of fog.... male mockingbirds fight one brief glimpse reveals bare limbed fig bush, pear blossoms.... streaked kitchen window weeping willow tree tiny green leaves, thick weeds grow.... a gap in the fence

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Warren Doll

Date: 3/18/2019 11:15:00 AM

Wonderful haiku; very creative and full of beautiful imagery. Warmest Wishes~ Warren

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/18/2019 5:39:00 PM

Warren, Thanks for dropping by and taking time to read and comment. Your review of my work is very uplifting. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2019 7:34:00 PM

I can just picture you picturing all these things around you!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/9/2019 7:33:00 AM

Andrea, I hope it is a good picture of a youthful me not the old poet that I am. LOL...Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 3/5/2019 7:55:00 AM

I truly enjoyed this string of short poems, Sara. They are as delightful as the picture which accompanies them. Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/5/2019 9:40:00 AM

Paul, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2019 12:42:00 PM

What a detailed and lovely description of the sun on the horizon behind the house and field of flowers! Beautiful haiku, Sara. Best wishes, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/4/2019 4:21:00 PM

Carolyn, Thanks for dropping by. We have had so much fog, rain and dark cloudy days that little show of sun through the fog and clouds was like a giant ball of beaming light. Sara