Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

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Golden

golden ball of light
hidden by a rush of fog....
male mockingbirds fight 

one brief glimpse reveals
bare limbed fig bush, pear blossoms....
streaked kitchen window

weeping willow tree
tiny green leaves, thick weeds grow....
a gap in the fence  

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Warren Doll March 18, 2019 at 11:15 AM Wonderful haiku; very creative and full of beautiful imagery. Warmest Wishes~ Warren Sara Kendrick March 18, 2019 at 5:39 PM Warren, Thanks for dropping by and taking time to read and comment. Your review of my work is very uplifting. Sara

Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2019 at 7:34 PM I can just picture you picturing all these things around you! Sara Kendrick March 9, 2019 at 7:33 AM Andrea, I hope it is a good picture of a youthful me not the old poet that I am. LOL...Sara

Paul Callus March 5, 2019 at 7:55 AM I truly enjoyed this string of short poems, Sara. They are as delightful as the picture which accompanies them. Regards // paul Sara Kendrick March 5, 2019 at 9:40 AM Paul, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire March 4, 2019 at 12:42 PM What a detailed and lovely description of the sun on the horizon behind the house and field of flowers! Beautiful haiku, Sara. Best wishes, Carolyn Sara Kendrick March 4, 2019 at 4:21 PM Carolyn, Thanks for dropping by. We have had so much fog, rain and dark cloudy days that little show of sun through the fog and clouds was like a giant ball of beaming light. Sara