Gold Upon the Mountains

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Gold awakens mountains,
                                      life's fountain flows from mountains' womb down stream..

Contest:"Nature Monoku~Single Line"
Sponsor: ^Rick Parise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku" contest Sara. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 3:59 PM
Thank you Sarah of the Kendrik, life flows from the mountains true, nature keeps the flow dependant, if the rain is coming through? xo Don
K. Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 1:54 PM
Very beautiful and vivid write, Sara :) Super congrats on your win :D
Horne Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 11:44 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sara: )
Sweetheart Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 8:40 PM
Congrats Sara on your super win with this creative entry for Rick ..well done my friend..with luv..happy weekend too..
Dietrich Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 10:06 PM
I think you really captured the pictures' essence with this poem, Sara. Hope it does well in the contest. Luv, Andrea
Burton Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 3:15 PM
Enjoyed this poetry today. Have a good one.
Mehta Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 2:22 PM
Beautifully done piece for the contest, Sara
Song Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 12:31 PM
Great depiction of the picture with your poetic words.....best to you! Gwendolen
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 12:03 PM
Just excellent Sara!Love it.Best wishes.....
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