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gold fish frozen in the pond first dates

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Date: 10/25/2015 7:25:00 AM
Interesting work..Not sure the thoughts behind the lines though..I wonder if the fish thaw and live on????Sara
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Charles Henderson
Date: 10/25/2015 3:10:00 PM
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Charles Henderson
Date: 10/25/2015 2:58:00 PM
first dates-usually cool, apprehensive, more mental than physical, yes gold fish, like any other fish thaw out and swim. Sort of like a new relationship- - - I have heard that if you break the ice when the water is frozen solid, it will kill them. (I think because they are actually frozen and their vitals break)