Gold Fish

gold fish
frozen in the pond
first dates
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
October 25, 2015 at 7:25 AM
Interesting work..Not sure the thoughts behind the lines though..I wonder if the fish thaw and live on????Sara
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October 25, 2015 at 3:10 PM
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October 25, 2015 at 2:58 PM
first dates-usually cool, apprehensive, more mental than physical, yes gold fish, like any other fish thaw out and swim. Sort of like a new relationship- - - I have heard that if you break the ice when the water is frozen solid, it will kill them. (I think because they are actually frozen and their vitals break)
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